First 2 chapters in 15800 words, way too long!

Here is a draft of the first two chapters, it’s just a lot of materials I found online and on papers and books, but it’s way too long for a dissertation which must be 5000 words long overall. I’ll have to do a big trimming work. 1st CHAPTER – EMERGENCY OF CLIMATE CHANGE 1.1. Climate change should unify everyone. “The…

Thesis Draft feedbacks

From last Friday tutorial I got the feedbacks for my thesis draft and honestly they are not bad at all. Overall the research is moving in the right direction, but I should be more critical, especially in the first chapter where I talk about the emergency of climate change. There I shouldn’t take anything for granted, but critically reflect on…
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